Monday, April 4, 2016

Dreams Comments

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Dreams of Gold in the chest of our brains
Are made to go in the quest of our gains
Some rust when the ores are old
Other thrive when the story is told.
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Kojo Bonney
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Chinedu Dike 08 May 2018

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A witty creation Kojo. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 April 2016

Great mansions in the impulse of thought Gain unction when the people are taught How to master n direct the monster in a way To erect the giant lies in their brains. liked this stanza very much. thoughts, impulses. teaching. lies, brain. so many thoughts put together well. thank you. tony

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Kojo Bonney

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