Friday, September 18, 2015

Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the dreams my heart often sails
To a land serene where hope never frails
Deep beneath the woods, lush and green
Dwells a girl with a feiry sheen.
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Amol Ichalkaranje
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Chinedu Dike 14 October 2015

Beautiful romantic train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Amol. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 19 September 2015

Excellent poem, Amol. I often wish to retire to dreams

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