Dreams Comments
If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny;
If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth;
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A fascinating poem... so lucid poetic expression. I love this beautiful poem dear poetess.
Beautiful poem. Journey of river is not smooth still sweet dreams are a solace.
Another lovelybpiece with beautiful flow of words and rhyme. Cheers keep them coming
Beautiful! Dreams are not to be shattered! We can always enjoy their softness behind our eyes like the softness of a pillow under our head.
Let them be where they are - Untouched, Because dreams are not to be shattered! Yes, things untouched remain purer and fresh. A lovely theme well dealt with. A poem that renders sweet fragrance of your heart so well. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++
Thanks so much for your comments of appreciation. It is lovely to share with other poets! Thanks for the rating too.
Thanks a lot for reading my poem. You may like the translation of Tagore's Sadharan Meye. I have to read your other poems. Looking forward to read them.
flowers, pebbles, petals, dreams, angels, caring and touching........ a fine poem. thank you very much for your images.. tony
Thank you for reading my poem. I am delighted that you like the images and honoured with your comment a fine poem.
A very warm welcome to PH! May your journey be rewarding and fruitful! 'dreams are not to be shattered' - true! I love to dream. Dreams are my natural companion.
Thank you for your encouraging comments. I am delighted to be a part of a creative community, and be able to connect with other poets. We all dream!
Well written.. about Dreams! ! Nicely set imaginations! !
Thank you. My first poem on PH - hope to connect with people who dream!
An elegant piece of poetry! Sweet expression! My favorite lines are opening two lines: If my life is like a river, not all pebbles are shiny/ If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth...Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem 'An Ode to My Conscience'..Thank you
I really appreciate your positive comments. So glad you mentioned your favourite lines - that's going to help me writing in future! I can't wait to read your poem - An Ode - that seems exciting! Thank you.
A fine start with a nice poem, Malabika. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ray.
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If my life is like a flower, not all petals are smooth.....true.