Monday, December 29, 2014

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do you come like a fairy with wings?
You play your tunes on pleasing strings!
Why you dance nicely like a sweet butterfly?
You excite so much to I'm inspired to fly.
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Khalida Bano Ali 01 January 2015

A beautiful description..............10

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Yasmin Khan 31 December 2014

Dreams are lovely and love is dreamlike, a nice dream shared....thanks

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2014

Nicely penned. beautiful crafted

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Amitava Sur 30 December 2014

A pleasant dream which takes the mind in the land of fairies with pleasure.

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Bisma Mirza 30 December 2014

WOW! ! beautifully composed.... Superb! ! 100 on 100 :)

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Salini Nair 30 December 2014

amazing write on dreams....like it

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Valsa George 29 December 2014

Another beautiful poem! Dreams visit us mostly at night! But in broad day light also, we can have dreams! Dreams though transitory, take us to fairy lands! Sometimes, they frighten us in the form of nightmares!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 December 2014

Oh this is so beautifully composed really touches my soul........nice composition with nice diction.....10

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Khalid Saifullah 29 December 2014

what a poem! It's amazing...............10

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