Friday, January 10, 2014

Dreams Comments

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On a shore of silken powdery sand
I stand beside him
for he has carried me here
...from our home planet
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Muhammad Ali 22 January 2014

beautiful. a world inside a world. very smooth and fine Dream.

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Shahzia Batool 14 January 2014

the poem ends with an expectation to continue with the read......! ! !

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Stephen W 11 January 2014

I endorse Beauteous Victory's sentiments wholeheartedly: -) A lovely verse.

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Kanav Justa 11 January 2014

, , , wonderful poem that tells of great faith the two lovers shares in this poem., ..

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Wilfred Mellers 10 January 2014

Nice sentiments. Sometimes I feel that way myself.

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Marvin Brato 10 January 2014

So romantic..... ..past the moon ...and beyond the stars He smiled and said, come love I will show you a new world I will make all your dreams come true!

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