Monday, December 16, 2013

Dreams Comments

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They take us far, very far
Sometimes brightens our spirit
At times leaves us in despair too,
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Geetha Jayakumar 06 February 2014

Beautiful poem Kavya. I missed your wonderful dreams....Very true said one should dream and try hard to make it successful...Without dreams our life will not have any charm..Even if we miss out some dreams to make it happen, some dreams can be replaced with new ones......Keep on dreaming to make our future successful and lively. May God Bless you and all your dream come true....

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Vivek Tiwari 31 December 2013

From dreams awake, from bonds be free, be not afraid! Our dreams are our source of inspiration just be determined to Prove that. I cordially invite you to read my poem of similar ideas Now It's Time To Prove Ourselves.

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Valerie Dohren 31 December 2013

We all need our dreams, especially when life's realities weigh heavy. Good one Kavya.

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Aswath Raman 29 December 2013

Hmm.. Good job Akka.. The last two lines are really good.. We are sleeping if we are not dreaming.. And also, you are developing as a poet very fast. You are able to give more depth in your lines..I'm proud!

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Muhammad Ali 27 December 2013

nice poem. dreams are something very much personal. nice to read.

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Dinesan Madathil 24 December 2013

Dreams have a magical impact too.. Future itself is made of dreams perhaps.. We must know the art of dreaming.. I often fail to see good dreams..

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Yasmin Khan 22 December 2013

We dream and dream, either they brighten or blur our lives but we cannot cease to dream as says Valsa ma'am.

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Valsa George 19 December 2013

It is dreams that make us live! When we cease to dream, we cease to live! Our dreams may be rosy, but chase the dreams and work for their fulfillment! Let us ride on the wings of beautiful dreams to the New Year! ! A lovely write! !

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Tribhawan Kaul 18 December 2013

Dreams sustain us with hope. Last two lines say it all.

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Kanav Justa 17 December 2013

, , , every dream no matter big or small gives us great pleasure once we achieve it, , , sure we must chase our dreams even we see the dream fading, , wonderful poem and a wonderful message

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David Wood 16 December 2013

Dreams can bring hope of a better future, though some offer nightmares of despair. Good poem Kavya.

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Shahzia Batool 16 December 2013

yes Kavya, dreams are the abstract outlining of all our future planning...other than sight, dreams are also important for eyes! ! !

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