Thursday, July 11, 2013

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

The twilight's incense has turned into a small heap;
the prayers are asleep
and God is making himself comfortable
in the wooden frames.
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Aman Saa
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Chandana Khan 21 July 2013

The twilight's incense has turned into a small heap; the prayers are asleep and God is making himself comfortable in the wooden frames. Very nice composition.a worked out expression.nicely done.the 1st line sets me. 9 marks

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

nice write. like a prose. enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

a nice write keep up your writing.

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Passionate Reader 13 July 2013

A truly beautiful poem! ! ! and in the entire village all I shall be left with is a dream to walk through the cold night awake and alive. I might be greeted by some dying wishes, some thatched huts, some weakened souls, collapsed walls, a haunted field weeping whole night. You have a different writing style. i loved it :)

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Ramesh Rai 12 July 2013

beautiful write my frnd. keep it up. plz. do not stop writing. my best wishes is always for you

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Shahzia Batool 11 July 2013

a timeless write: I shall curl digging into myself for a company, a consoling human touch

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