When I was a child I had this dream
of flowers and butterflies
and all things that gleam.
I would go to the garden
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Ma'am That's an outstanding extraordinary piece of work.. childhood is flower, that we wish would stay ever blooming but it droops.. yet its incense ticks most of times and imparts a consoling peace. Thanks to you, your this poem added more fragrance to those past memories....
this is a beautiful poem of introspection, , the first part has a dream-like atmosphere and the second nightmarish...thanx
There is no better time than your childhood Cherry. And yes, things get tough when you 'grow up', but soon you will dream of beautiful things once again - I guarantee it. I wrote a poem called depression, which you might like to look at.