Friday, October 12, 2012

Dreams Comments

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When I was a child I had this dream
of flowers and butterflies
and all things that gleam.
I would go to the garden
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Cherry Kell
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John Brown 13 October 2012

There is no better time than your childhood Cherry. And yes, things get tough when you 'grow up', but soon you will dream of beautiful things once again - I guarantee it. I wrote a poem called depression, which you might like to look at.

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Yash Shinde 12 October 2012

love it, flows so smoothly...................waiting for next

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Saleem Tharani 12 October 2012

Ma'am That's an outstanding extraordinary piece of work.. childhood is flower, that we wish would stay ever blooming but it droops.. yet its incense ticks most of times and imparts a consoling peace. Thanks to you, your this poem added more fragrance to those past memories....

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R.k Das 12 October 2012

this is a beautiful poem of introspection, , the first part has a dream-like atmosphere and the second nightmarish...thanx

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