Thursday, July 5, 2012

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

One of lifes simple pleasures is to sleep
memories that can make us forever weep
Upon losing someone that you miss so much
it's in a dream you can feel their touch
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Dee Corpolongo
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M Asim Nehal 01 July 2016

Awesome poem, very refreshing one for me. Some lines are great To know the feeling of true love and pleasure is something that my heart will forever treasure

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Heather Wilkins 18 September 2013

a lovely take on dreams. Some just never end.

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Ken E Hall 27 May 2013

Beautiful thoughts beautiful poem, memories of loved ones lost, my own loss of a child will live in my heart forever...dreams I cherish...thanks and regards

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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

yes well said. the limits of the mind really are tested to their surrealist in real dreams; I susppose they are deep. all the same one woke me up at 3 this morning. XD

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Smoky Hoss 27 December 2012

Oh so very well said; this speaks softly for so many of us. Beautiful words.

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Dave Walker 12 November 2012

A dream can stay with us forever. A fantastic poem.

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Valerie Dohren 05 October 2012

Lovely poem Dee, captures the sentiment beautifully.

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Dee Corpolongo

Dee Corpolongo

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