Sunday, June 17, 2012

Dreams! ! ! ! Comments

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Dreams fade away as the clouds of skies
Griefs shed as blood through my eyes
In no time, I may forget all sorrows,
As I'm stabbed by many poisonous arrows
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 June 2012

I can't dream anymore. Try Another Shade Of Blue when you have a minute. Thanks.

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Valsa George 24 June 2012

A life not lured by dreams is certainly a barren life. Continue to dream n' dream, though all our dreams may not be materialized.... a very nice poem! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 18 June 2012

well written poem about dreams-thank you for sharing

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Neela Nath Das 18 June 2012

Dreams are the leading power of ours...So, it may come true someday.Death is inevitable.But, our dreams make us run to reach the goal.Very nice poem.

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Unwritten Soul 17 June 2012

Life is lovable if we can grab all as we need, Life is painful when we just can see the thing but we can reach...and about that we talked about dream, and the meaning of it carries, I am glad you are back writing one more time Vipins, i can feel how rough your road that you faced now, If this life is like a race i guess we must finish the line no matter what with the best try as we can, never surrender in this life and end it halfway...Dream could be a cruel but it cruel to self if we kill the dream itself, if today is not a day we get it someday we must...who knows in nearest time what we will gain..so never give up, go on and remember we never get something if we not start any initial start_Unwritten Soul

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