Dreams Comments
A breeze rustles through
On the greenish - brown hills;
Scattering raindrops of different colours
Puddles the flood of green paddy-fields;
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Very descriptive and good word choice. It sounds like you're also talking about being lost in some way, which is hightly relatable :)
What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.
A wondrous poem written from your soul. I could see, smell and hear your world... blessings
realism of life expressed explicitly through the fictitious world of dreams.. nice write yet again! ! !
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7/27/2025 12:26:50 PM # 1.0.0
Nice poem..I like the way you have described the transition from the dream to reality