Monday, January 30, 2012

Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.5

A breeze rustles through
On the greenish - brown hills;
Scattering raindrops of different colours
Puddles the flood of green paddy-fields;
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Deep Mukherjee
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Shivani Gupta 18 August 2012

Nice poem..I like the way you have described the transition from the dream to reality

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Amy Marie 18 February 2012

Very descriptive and good word choice. It sounds like you're also talking about being lost in some way, which is hightly relatable :)

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Wahab Abdul 05 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

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Ramesh Rai 01 February 2012

in dream, the soul wonders everywhere. nice

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Cosmic Dreamer 31 January 2012

A wondrous journey of the mind... Very well done...

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(De Va) 31 January 2012

A wondrous poem written from your soul. I could see, smell and hear your world... blessings

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Aastha Uppal 31 January 2012

realism of life expressed explicitly through the fictitious world of dreams.. nice write yet again! ! !

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Nivedita Moitra 30 January 2012

so near and yet so far is nature. Beautiful poem.

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