Thursday, July 29, 2010

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

People do different things when they are bored.
Some might sing, some might dance,
Some might even do chores!
But I do something very different
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Renee Alexandria Ho
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Omar Ibrahim 01 August 2010

sitting alone to think is what builds up experience not only the circumstances and situations....good thoughts and ideas but remember poetry is denotative not connotative. thanks for sharing

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010

‘‘Life is just a wonderful mystery.’’ ~ we’ve to unfold it…dreaming both prize and punishment…as you’ve wrote we’ve to accept but…even in reality…stay stoic and or vigilant very good poetry …programmed wisely as you conclude, ‘ Life is hard and then you die…’… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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