Monday, December 14, 2009

Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dreams can be as wonder full as your first kiss
Dreams can be great as the first score in a game
what i love about dreams is they can determine your fate
or know exactly what's bothering u
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giggling wonder
COMMENTS
Seraphim Foxette 17 December 2009

So eccentric! i read it atleast twice befor fully understanding it! its lovely!

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it's a simple abd basic poem but it states your opinions and screams TRUTH as you read. and i liked the comparisons. good job! ! !

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Eyan Desir 16 December 2009

nice poem well expressed

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Shy Beauty Raven 16 December 2009

I think i have to agree with Robbie Squires it is simple i like it.

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Robbie Squires 15 December 2009

i loved this one. its just so simple but at the same time really awesome. plus ur aerosmith reference was cool too ;) . i also liked it because it was one of the few poems on here that actually made sense and i could relate to. awesome job.

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