Sunday, June 14, 2009

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

upon taking refuge in my dreams...
i look down at my palms
i look at what i always wanted
and then i look how it's absence haunted
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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 June 2009

Nice and dreamy. Last stanza is very nice.10+

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Grace A. 14 June 2009

Very beautiful poem ;)

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Marieta Maglas 14 June 2009

fine write..feelings are nicely depicted all through...10++

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