Dreams Comments

Joe. if only our beautiful dreams could be reality proofed. Instead, they are too often shattered by reality. Lovely poem. Good write. Thanks. 10.

lovely poem all of us wish the dream to be real 2 live it :)

Much truth is said in a very few simple lines.

'Dream melodies of floating light. Reality shatters it's mortal flight.' Beautiful poem,10+++

Dreams give hopes, reality shatters.......wonderful. Something like my poem DAY DREAM. This exceptionally good.

Floaty dreamy verse Joe and full of lovely metaphor......10 + ++ Fay

Wonderful image rich writing Joe...Fi 10+++

Excellent rhyming. Lovely poem

great end rhymes written with fine theme...........lovely!

O dear dreamy poem....... lovely work JOE :) 10.. Ali

very very very nice...........reality shatters........thank yu for your kind sharing.