Saturday, February 11, 2006

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dreams, oh the pleasure,
Of glorious companion,
Assist me in my search for treasure,
While I journey in sleep's convention.
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Christian Eliab Ratnam
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Patricia Gale 16 July 2009

A splendid flow, well done. Did enjoy

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Serene. Stylish. Mature. Grand. t x

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Lindsay Snider 05 March 2007

Love it. Be careful at endings of other poems when you add the copyright...I thought that was an actual part of the poem. Then again, I'm blonde-brained. :) Love always Lindsay

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Sylvia Spencer 08 March 2006

I wish I could have dreams like this/I always wake up before they have started/ apoem so full of imagination just loved it. cheers Sylvie

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Patricia Gale 17 February 2006

Very, very nice. Such talent for such a young soul. Regards Patricia

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