Saturday, January 10, 2009

Dreams Comments

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Dreams why do you torment me so?
With visions of that for which I long for the most
But alas shall never come to be
Visions which escape my grasp every time like a ghost
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Casey O'Sheridan
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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

This is a nice poetic composition. The message is clearer as well. Even though there is a longing, there is a definition to that longing. This is really quite good. I enjoyed reading it because it flowed as well. A fine job by the writer. GW62

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Pranati Shroff 10 January 2009

well a nice composition

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