Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Dreams Comments

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if you whish hard enough dreams will come true,
if you have hope in each day,
dreams will come true
if you believe,
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Tammie LilAimo
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Tammie Aimson 18 March 2013

There has always been pain in that last line. No matter how hard i try to stop my self i always end up dreaming.

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Alex Medina 12 June 2012

Dreaming and believing can only get you so far. Some dreams are all that they are: dreams. I know what you mean though. I can feel pain in the last line.

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Dave Walker 01 February 2012

A great poem, really liked it. A great write.

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