Wednesday, March 19, 2008

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Till the other day, I was a wandering soul,
unsure of myself and my long cherished goal,
moving at a snail's pace was my indentity
and I always envisioned being a formidable entity.
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Poras Sharma
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Mamta Agarwal 29 April 2008

a very nice poem.shows indomitable spirit and belief in yourself although assailed by doubts at times as is true of all of us

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Abha Sharma 26 April 2008

true and optimistic....all aims and dreams are realised but the time is unknown...keep going through all impediments...success will come... 'Der hai andher nahin' and this is Life...well composed...liked the spirit of the poem...

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BigBull Torro 13 April 2008

This is one great write bro and I Simply LOVE it... Asome job Dreams can come true, if we want it bad we can make it through. We all dream but few realize there dream. We just wake up hoping it will come true. Until we make sincere efforts nothing is true. So dream on Dreamer... :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 April 2008

beautiful dreams are hard to come by..............

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 27 March 2008

Beautiful poem about the life and its struggle........I have writtesn similar ones

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Mamta Agarwal 22 March 2008

a sincere poem.thanks for liking a walk....

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