Saturday, December 8, 2007

Dreams Comments

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Dreams I have,
Where I am never wrong;
Dreams I have,
In which I remain forever young.
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Polar Bear 08 December 2007

you should never give up on your dreams... the staying forever young one -maybe :) I liked your use of repetition and how it flowed together nicely. Good job :)

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Somnath Roy

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