Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

When your lips gently found mine
I found I was one heart beat away from eternity
Lost in a time of aimlessly floating on clouds of love
A single kiss and my world turned upside down
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Patricia Gale
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Bishnupada Sethi 01 July 2007

Love is a mixture of both the reality and dream. The experience of loving and being loved has been powerfully expressed by you. Keep it up, Patricia

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Melvina Germain 20 June 2007

This is a lovely piece of poetry Patricia, the intertwining of dreams and reality, beautiful indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed the read Patricia.--melvina--

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Duncan Wyllie 22 April 2007

You know, just maybe there could merge for you Patricia A lovely piece again from you Take care Love duncan x

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David Taylor 19 April 2007

Virtual reality of Dreams can come true, but often fleetingly it seems, Eternity in a moment, but how to make it eternally true?

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Theodora Onken 18 April 2007

Loved this and if that is a pic of you, what a living Doll you are...looks like auburn hair, too! Love your writing! Blessings, Theo

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Geoff Warden 17 April 2007

As a dreamers heart sings, grand write........

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... Sheila 17 April 2007

What a beautiful, sweet dream. Very good piece. Blessings. Sheila

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