Saturday, July 1, 2006

Dreamlit Days Of Watered Spread, Parted By Other's Own Interrupted Dread. Comments

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For tho' dreamlit days traveled sparse...
I fall'd fro' a tall tree's branch, 'lo shaken and marshed.
Frond's pondly acred square...
Show'eth thy leaves well tendered by care.
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Nalini Hebbar 01 July 2006

Hasten to thy wasted laid... Mast too high for wanted glade...you wrote the same thing in two ways in two poems...wow...yes nature speaks to us...but do we have the time to listen? ...do we have the will to make the correction? ...yes you do, just got to try! ! ! ...lovely thoughts michael...i think it will take me a 100 years to come even close to writing anything like you do...nalini

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SIR MJG...WHERE DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE ELABORATE TITLES? THY'RE QUITE IMMAGINATIVE FOR SURE...NICE STORYLINE HERE...JOB WELL DONE'''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''

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