Dreamland Comments

What a marvellous love poem! Why can't the prince in her dream be you yourself....10

Your illustration is brilliant, the picture so clear. Good one there

Exqusitely beautiful! ! ....how i wish i could be in that euphoric land! !

Its a beautiful picturesque poem, I could almost see the images...

Its a beautiful picturesque poem, I could almost see the images...

Nice writing but left me a little sad. Good Job! =)

very sweet poem...nice rhyming

A lovely poem with nice rhyming.

What an interesting poem! You have a nice ability to tell an imaginative story :)

You paint a wonderfully romantic picture here Tiku akp! And the final lines 'Ouch' effect upon the scene, is tragedy at its poetic best. Smiling at you Tai, longing for those far off dreamer days of chivalry rather than shivery! lol

Loved this one too and your use of language is great.