Wednesday, March 1, 2023

Dreamland Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Let me dream of you tonight,
Walk with me upon the shore,
Take my hand and hold it tight,
The sun will shine again once more.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

Vivid dreams are a reality not experienced by too many. Beautiful reality to your poetry, Jayne.

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Kim Barney 02 March 2023

Jayne, I have to agree with Cowboy Ron. I would not be surprised to see this chosen as member poem of the day!

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Jayne Louise Davies 02 March 2023

Thank you so much Kim x So pleased you liked it x

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 02 March 2023

And I hope Ron's prediction comes true soon!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 02 March 2023

A beautiful poem of love and remembrance, " It's good to hold your hand in mine"..exquisite. " In dreamland life with you goes on." Great rhyme scheme. Fantastic poem, Jayne.5*

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 March 2023

Thank you so much for your kind comments : ) Much appreciated x

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 March 2023

Excellent poem, Jayne! Congrats on Member Poem of the Day at some point in the near future!

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Jayne Louise Davies 02 March 2023

Thank you so much Ron : ) Your lovely comments mean a lot x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Jayne Louise Davies
Jayne Louise Davies
Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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