Saturday, July 18, 2015

Dreamland Comments

Rating: 5.0

You wandered through my dreams last night,
just thought I'd let you know,
it seems that when I fall asleep
my mind knows where to go;
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Linda Ori
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Yiyan Han 23 October 2020

Dreamy piece: when you desire something during the day it'll come to your dreams at night.5+ keep dreaming :)

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Kim Barney 03 October 2020

What an amazing thought! Two people dreaming of each other could meet in their dreams and... anything could happen next. Wonderful!

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Linda O. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 January 2017

Wow dreamy and awesome in flow n rhyming. Content presented in an admirable poetic way. Great to read from u again. This is masterpiece quality. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too titled 'pay a visit to a riverbank'

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

A lilting and rhythmic poem, flows so easily like a river to the ocean. Our minds find their way no matter whether we're awake or asleep, and we dream of those we've love or cared about through the years. Wonderful thoughts. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Jim Hogg 29 October 2015

Silky smooth as always, awash with lovely thoughts...

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Rahman Henry 30 August 2015

'perhaps we'll meet 'neath sleeping skies.' Beautiful poem. Thanks to share with us, dear poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2015

My mind knows where to go! With the muse of the dreams of life. Nice work.

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