Saturday, July 15, 2006

Dreamland Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dreamt of a dream, a dream that lasted a lifetime.
I dreamt of a dream, a dream I died for to be mine.
It began with pain and ended the same
... and all the while I forgot that I was sleeping.
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Anjana Aravind 25 July 2006

'I dreamt of a dream that lasted an eternity. It began with joy and ended in joy and all the while I knew that I was being.' This beats everything else. Wonderful. Anjana

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Nalini Hebbar 15 July 2006

kristin...that is the best poem i have read on PH! ! ! ...you are and enlightened soul and have so much to offer to all around you...this poem is 'your mind, heart, and soul on paper'....the pureness of your thought and soul touches me...love...nalini

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***** ********* 15 July 2006

I value dream time as greatly as I do waking time Kristin, a brilliantly clear dream poem indeed. So lucid and empowering. Excellent work from a very fine poet indeed. Smiling at you, Tai

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WE ARE THE DREAMERS OF THE WORD MY DEAR, FOR IF WE DID NOT EXIST, THOSE WHO NEVER EXPERIENCED, SOME OF THE FINEST OF LIFES SENSES, WOULD NOT HAVE AN UNDERSTANDING AS TO WHAT THEY ARE MISSING.WHEN PEOPLE PICK UP AND READ YOUR DEPICTIONS, UNLESS THEY ARE IMMUNE TO SENSE, THEY EMBRACE A CAPTURE OF THE PASSIONS THAT COMPLETE THE FULL MEASURE OF A SOUL& THE SPIRITS THAT ENSCOCE AROUND IT...THATS THE WORTH OF YOUR WRITING, KRIS...THAT IS WHAT YOU ARE ALL ABOUT....FRANK

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Michael Manners 15 July 2006

'Let us see this dream to its end, remembering that we have dreamed before and will dream again'.! Beautiful Poem, one of My fav's (Ever) Kristin I loved it, I was it's eager Prisoner while reading it! Great Work! ! ! ! ! Stay Srong! ! ! ! ! All the Best you Bodhisattva (great wise Being, Great wise Angel) Signed yours Truly St. Sir Michael Manners

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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