Lets go back their
Where I belong
Love filled atmosphere
I stand stiff and strong
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I could visualize ur dreamland.......so well described.........10
truly lets go to that dreamland where love is all around Days are beautiful and Nights are long. ++++++10 anju
Asif this is a lovle poem full of hope and happiness. i have written several poems on dreamland myself. it is one of my favourite topics. well done. and good luck! !
Nice portrayal of a peaceful safe haven.
A dreamland, there will be after all the adversities...If Alice had passed with the wizard of the ooz, and ended tha tale with a wonderful dream... what more to life when we all have achieved our dreams with HIM...a 10.
ah dreamland! we r living in Eliot's' wasteland'... Nice is the flow of verses as waterfall came out it seems! 10+++++
If we want to see this world a better place, we need to dream of a dreamland at first. Then we should try to turn our dreams into reality. I share the same dream.10 from me.
that place that we all call paradise ....utopian concept well penned
Let me have some moments in the dreamy environment. Shabash Asif.10+
We all have our dreamlands of refuge and peace. Very poignant. Ten for you. Kind regards, Sandra
it soothes my mind to think of yr dreamland..i hope we all can turn our mother earth into a place whr love, peace n harmony prevails everywhr :)