Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Dreamland Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lets go back their
Where I belong
Love filled atmosphere
I stand stiff and strong
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Asif Baloch
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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

it soothes my mind to think of yr dreamland..i hope we all can turn our mother earth into a place whr love, peace n harmony prevails everywhr :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 October 2008

I could visualize ur dreamland.......so well described.........10

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Egi David Perdana 22 October 2008

sir aijaz this so much touch me, really master piece 10

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Anjali Sinha 22 October 2008

truly lets go to that dreamland where love is all around Days are beautiful and Nights are long. ++++++10 anju

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Seema Chowdhury 22 October 2008

Asif this is a lovle poem full of hope and happiness. i have written several poems on dreamland myself. it is one of my favourite topics. well done. and good luck! !

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Nice portrayal of a peaceful safe haven.

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C T Heart 21 October 2008

A dreamland, there will be after all the adversities...If Alice had passed with the wizard of the ooz, and ended tha tale with a wonderful dream... what more to life when we all have achieved our dreams with HIM...a 10.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 October 2008

ah dreamland! we r living in Eliot's' wasteland'... Nice is the flow of verses as waterfall came out it seems! 10+++++

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Asif Andalib 21 October 2008

If we want to see this world a better place, we need to dream of a dreamland at first. Then we should try to turn our dreams into reality. I share the same dream.10 from me.

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Chitra - 21 October 2008

that place that we all call paradise ....utopian concept well penned

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

Let me have some moments in the dreamy environment. Shabash Asif.10+

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It is my kind of poem. I love it.. Ten

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Sandra Fowler 21 October 2008

We all have our dreamlands of refuge and peace. Very poignant. Ten for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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