Sunday, November 18, 2018

Dreaming Of You Comments

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I dreamt about you last night
We were in a forest
Golden paths intertwined
We were holding hands
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Jennifer Birchall
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Practicing Poetess 26 March 2019

I suppose the nightmare was the realisation that he was no longer there.

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Practicing Poetess 26 March 2019

I suppose the nightmare was the realisation that he was no longer there.

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Julia Luber 08 March 2019

She is in love with somebody else in her dreams and perhaps her poems too and it seems real life starts with a nightmare.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2019

Golden paths! ! ! ! Dreaming, Break up. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 November 2018

We ran to a secret shelter we kissed You looked at me with love in your eyes Then I awoke to this nightmare....the nightmare that we have broken up. at the end it is painful. you began with such a feeling of love. thank u. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

It was a lovely dream but sadly the nightmare of waking up to reality.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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