I dreamed of you picking flowers on a sunny shore,
Continually running with you,
Were the daybreak announcing waking of life.
You were wearing a crown of poppies,
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Your this poem weaves dream around the reader.Reading through this poem, i ws transported to d fairy dreamland for sometime.Dream and Love r eternal partners and a ROSE makes this partnership strong, beautiful and full of fragnance.FOR LOVERS even d state of wakefulness is a realm of dreams, and u hv successfully brought this intrinsic quality before d reader. Like ur other poems, here too, D USE OF SIMPLE DICTION AND BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY has given a touch of warmth.A MUST READ FOR THOSE LOVERS WHO ARE BLESSED TO FEEL THE JOY OF BEING IN LOVE!
A romantic sojourn from Cristina. I liked it for its verse and flow. Full 10 marks. Narayanan.R