Dreaming Of The Sea Comments

Your introduction (first two lines) is most imaginative and inviting.

Eloquently stunning work A.J.. Mitch

And once again I am dreaming of the sea. When eternity will bring my love back to me. A super couplet to end a super poem. Lovely language throughout.

Oooh I love it. The way you put it it's like steamy but like not in the bad way it's in hte way where it's like wow I want that type of thing like you read like you miss that person those are the things you miss like ahh i had this all in my head and now I can't say it right. It's just love ya know love like can't stop kissin movie moment thing Idk! lol i tried. Lylyanna

Hi A.J. Great poem I love it the imagery had me so open and wild and free, Love your friend Gavin

Sensual and achingly beautiful. So much longing. I like this one very much, especially the last line.

An impressive and tactful mix of Romance and Erotica, within the captures of sterling image... A Fine Penning indeed...'''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

A stunningly sensual and beautiful display of words, well done here, this is great! ! ! Love duncan X

Lovely poem...... Anjana