Wednesday, January 25, 2006

Dreaming Of Death Comments

Rating: 2.8

My night-heart is cold-cruel and deepest black;
The eldritch curtain of the deathly sky
Curselike swathes my gloomy land of hate-dreams.
My soul lies buried in a well of pain,
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Edna Sweetlove
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Peter The Poet 15 February 2021

I laughed a lot at this. Well written as I like a good giggle.

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kskdnj sajn 25 January 2006

Really enjoyed the way you used emotion and language to express your anger and pain. Sure glad you're not hiding under my bed!

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Michael Gale 25 January 2006

There is such sadness that saddens my soul...I hope God blesses your life and makes you at last happily whole!

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