Monday, March 16, 2015

...Dreaming Of Daydreams... Comments

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I wish I wish if only a bird could talk
They sure can sing on my morrning walk
The rythmn of life beats their wings in heavenly hands
Flying thousands of kilometers to warmer lands
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Ken e Hall
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 April 2015

I wish and know that only a bird can talk here with dreaming in day time from high and form far with wonderful vision. Nicely drafted and shared really.

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Kelly Kurt 25 March 2015

It is great to feel the awe and joy of such things from another human. Thankyoufor sharing Peace

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 March 2015

Wow a brilliant masterpiece! Divine and stimulating. Yes i tink God has implanted an inbuilt compass in these our feathered friends to have such great sense of direction. This was one of your best poems for me. Great to spot it, to read frm u again.

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Lyn Paul 16 March 2015

Birds tweeting, day dreaming, fresh air. Now that is being alive........The power of the lord loves all our souls.. A beautiful line.. Thank You

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Ken e Hall

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