Monday, July 6, 2009

Dreaming Need Comments

Rating: 2.8

I lay down my heart for you
useless, beat-less
it will be
if you do not come back to me.
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Lonnie Hicks
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 12 October 2009

Lonnie, Your passion for Miss Dream, expressed variously, is irrepressibly palpable, as well as infectious. What a wonder are dreams! Full of eerie fantasies, with inexplicable turns, with the past-present-future concocted into a single unique tense – all for free! No rental, no ticket, no fuel costs! Most of the dreams we don’t remember, but whatever little remains in the memory, it distils into beautiful poetry, if only we care. Naturally, for this dreamy fare, you get your #10.

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