Friday, April 27, 2007

Dreaming Before Sunrise.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling a deep sigh form from my soul
My heart close enough to heaven that
I could touch an angel’s wings
As I lay next to you
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Patricia Gale
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Francis Duggan 08 January 2008

Such beautiful work Patricia very well written with excellent imagery

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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

Dreamy! ZZZZZZZZ but Agree with the others! Paul.

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Leila K 27 April 2007

This is truly what dreams are made of....i could feel a deep sigh from within....jus reading this carried me away....loved it....love LeilaXXXXXX

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 April 2007

It goes as a fairy tale and this lullaby soothes reader's heart.

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Esther Leclerc 27 April 2007

Reading this is like a dream, Patricia. Ever so beautiful. Wonderful wordplay ('babe in her cradle') , silky imagery and mood.

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Sigh... beautiful as ever P. You are the mistress of pieces of this genre. t x

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