Monday, June 8, 2009

Dreaming Comments

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Hours and minutes have ponderously run their course.
My teenage excitement is barely contained,
Like an anxious father patiently waiting outside the maternity ward, I pace
Pace to exhaust those last few minutes
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Adrian Murphy
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Sans Serif 11 September 2009

I like the sense of how it flows and the rhyming. great write.

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Stephen Stirk 12 June 2009

A lovely well written poem. It flows well, and there is good rythmn. Most enjoyable Best Steve

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Adrian Murphy

Adrian Murphy

Northern Ireland
Adrian Murphy
Adrian Murphy
Northern Ireland
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