Dreaming Comments

Powerfully observant - your imagination as you gaze on the object of this writing is pure and totally in touch with who she is. Not many men would even wonder what a woman was dreaming about, let alone attempt to describe it. You've mastered this beautifully! A pleasure to read, Jim. Linda :)

this one is truly my favorite of you. i like how she is even beautiful when she dreams. and all the detail is in a melodic sway. i enjoyed this one greatly. thank you for the read. Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth deSpain

Again, beautifully written, but much more positive this time.

really good! this stupid thing says i have to put at least 20 characters.. why can't we just say Really good! or great, good job bubba.? ? ?

So evocative and reminicient of the poet Dylon Thomas with his powerful ability to produce prose that grips the soul. This deserves a ten James. and well done. Keep up your search for extracting the essence of the moment. Love is all - forever...