Saturday, March 29, 2008

Dreaming Comments

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I wondered off to sleep last night
Wanting to escape my world
Five sleep aid pills helped in my fight
to go and dream as I lay curled
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Josh Brabender
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Evaughn Gray 06 April 2008

wow, that was a good poem...i loved it...~Hazel G.E

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Greenwolfe 1962 05 April 2008

I hope that's the way it goes! Good rhyming and good potential. Might be worth another visit. Greenwolfe 1962 To the rescue

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