Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Dreaming Comments

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Breezes soft as an angels kiss
caress the sleeping maiden’s hair.
Whilst she is lost in dreams of bliss.
Reality cannot compare
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Jennifer Perryman 28 September 2007

Hi Poet, I hope her soul mate will be waiting, and all her dreams will come true. Alas, most us do plot and scheme. Exceptional poetry.........'Enjoyed'

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Ernestine Northover 22 August 2007

Dreams are such an escape from the everyday trials and tribulations. Reality hits us far too soon, and our dreams become a sequence of muddled thoughts. Another well written piece Ivor. Very nice read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Poison 9901 21 August 2007

'Truer words have never been spoken, than the dreams of a child suddenly broken' I agree with Mary C. Thanks for the read. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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Mary Ali 21 August 2007

This is very beautiful and true. We have to wake from the dream of innocence to face the life of sin and misery. We have to grow up from the childhood of happiness, to the maturity of sadness. thank you Ivor for sharing this with us, for sharing it with me, I utterly love it. Mary xxx

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