Saturday, September 13, 2008

Dreaming Comments

Rating: 3.5

I wish I could be there where you are
I wish I could see you even though you are so far
You will always be in my dreams even though they dont come true
I lie and lie and lie so i dont get confused
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Alexis Rolon
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

You wonder but you have a true wish. There is no need to fear. Right dream brings reality and motivates life towards success.

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Lynn Glover 27 October 2009

Alexis, your poetry has promise, however, I found these mistakes in spelling. Thoe-Though (twice) were-where. Be more aware of the spelling in your poems. Keep writing, Lynnb

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