Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Dreaming? Comments

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I was so lost
I didn't know what to do
I knew the cost
being with you
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Monica Albarran
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Joe No 20 January 2013

very good, most important thing is to love yourself, you must love yourself in order to know love.

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Nick Patrick 24 October 2012

Very vivid and visceral poem, Monica, well done!

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Lyn Paul 24 October 2012

I hope you are no longer lost Monica. You need to realise just how important YOU really are. Beautifully written. Thank You

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