Monday, December 10, 2012
Dreamfall Comments
Rating: ★4.5
If the rain were to create a river,
one made of my dreams pure,
then my world would begin to shiver,
until I fall away from the cure.
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Scott Mcqueen
11 December 2012
Excellent work. Brilliant imagery and structured rhyme scheme. Quite beautiful.
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7/27/2025 6:58:50 PM # 1.0.0
The rain falls so lightly, and its drops burn me slightly, for they each dream my memories, ripping them from their cemeteries. That's my favorite part. Nice imagery as always.