Thursday, December 4, 2008

Dreamers' Nightmare Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are now devided by the bluest sea,
Gentle blow of the wind took you away from me,
The brightest star is now out of my sight;
Sun is refusin' to give its light.
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Cindy Velasquez 17 April 2009

i just love the second stanza, you manage to keep the rhyme in the poem.

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Fathmath Sana 11 April 2009

nice poem! i loved reading it! weldone! and keep it up! and please dropp your eyes on one of my poems+ vote them! ! ! ! sana 1000000000000000000000000/1000000000000000000000000

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.... I don't even know what to say. I would guess that your imagination is very vivid. Especially with how descriptive the poem is. Keep up the great work! ~R-D-F~Rawr. <3

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