Monday, November 20, 2017

Dreamers Matter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mangled swollen skins arrive
bleeding bitter dark prayers;
loathsome chants of naysayers
detached dreams dying alive
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Sona Wilae
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Unlike India, the US was built by the immigrants. But, we have to recall that the immigrants decimated the indigenous population and their culture. Not just that, the so-called immigrants perpetrated and perpetuated racism by slave trade. So the US society practices it still…

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"Come expecting hued disgust Seek out peace, as we all must " A poem of varied hues and emotions. Top score for this lovely poem.

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2018

An insightful piece of poetry embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Well crafted and elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Sona and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 December 2017

Seek out peace, as we all must Seek justice from dawn to dusk. congrats for being selected as the poem of the day........ you are conveying great ideas of peace and justice at the end of the poem.. thank you dear...tony

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2017

Congrats for your thoughtful poem being selected as members poem of the day.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 December 2017

Everyday the world is becoming more painful, more irritating, and more frightening. Political and economical factors force us to migrate to another place with a lot of dreams in our eyes, but everywhere immigrants are disliked and treated as a second class humans.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 December 2017

Yes dreamer of land will be stunned by this blow of immigration to his dreams yet our peace with so called power with whom we have been engaged has also to be included for we wish peace, but we wish the peace of justice, the peace of righteousness.......very well crafted deserves P.O.D......thanks for sharing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 December 2017

Gorgeous, high-quality poem, a treasure to my heart. The Art printed here, the face of John Lennon is absorbingly beautiful since I am a designer too, I value this as it must be valued Thank you for sharing this Dreamers Matter, a loveliest joyful ride. I dare not to give a TEN Vote to your Poem Of The Day since this is of a tremendous Beauty.

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Sona Wilae 16 December 2017

Thank you Sylvia! Your encouraging words mean a lot to me.

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Rajnish Manga 16 December 2017

I like the concept of the poem along with its rhyming. We need such dreamers who can fight evil forces and work for the emancipation of one and all. Thanks. I quote: Seek out peace, as we all must Seek justice from dawn to dusk.

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Ramesh T A 16 December 2017

Composition is beautiful as a verse! But difficult to decipher exactly! How can dreams be possible in a tyrannt's rule? So, all dreamers will die in such an harsh situation in life!

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Sona Wilae 16 December 2017

Exactly Ramesh...As a concerned citizen, I will continue to fight alongside humanity to provoke justice. #ALLLIVESMATTER

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 December 2017

This is very nice poem reflecting present day situation. Congrats on being chosen as the poem of the day.

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Prabhakar Srivastava 16 December 2017

Very Nice Poem Sona Congratulations for poem of the day

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Sona Wilae 16 December 2017

Thank you so much for the encouragement.

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Tom Allport 16 December 2017

a poem with a dream of going boldly to new worlds and to be welcomed there? wonderfully written Sona

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2017

Swollen Skins! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 December 2017

Sona, congrats for being chosen...10+++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 November 2017

Such a brilliant write, Sona....

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Sona Wilae 25 November 2017

Thank you so much....!

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