Thursday, October 1, 2009

Dreamers Dream Within A Dream Comments

Rating: 3.3

Stop. Don't stop. Walk. Don't walk. Stay. Don't stay. Leave. Don't leave.
It’s like we run around these words hoping for some reason to hold on to, and all that is known is all that we can see, feel, taste, touch, and hear.
For some reason it resonates in the back of my mind like I am still hoping for the chance to make you mine? And yet I hear you call my name so clearly but yet I do nothing to keep it still.
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Jerad Castaneda
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Danny H 25 October 2009

The improvements make it even better which is hard!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 21 October 2009

Interesting read. One which I very much enjoyed; -)

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John Mcmanus 21 October 2009

not bad Jerad, keep writing and always remember to be original.

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just a dream within a dream of a dreamers dream.. lovely said.

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Jerad Castaneda

Jerad Castaneda

Red Bluff CA
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