Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Dreamers Blues. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Saw Dylan Thomas last night in a dream,
with a silver banjo and dancing queen.
Said, “ Hi Dylan how’s your luck”.
He said, “I’m leaving here fast in a supercharged truck,
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 09 July 2009

Simply wonderful - Narrative, wit and imagery has me grinning - always a joy to read your poems Wojja

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Luningning Minguez 26 June 2009

Wow! Genius... You are!

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Yelena M. 27 April 2009

A very inspiring tribute, so well crafted! Thanks for sharing a banjo spirit. Best wishes. A.

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Subroto Chatterjee 21 April 2009

There's this one from Dylan Thomas: 'The ball which I threw up in the park has still not reached the ground...' Soar blythe spirit! Soar unto the limitless void of happy spirits! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Amanda 'blue' Leigh 13 February 2009

that just fills me with joy...*))) it's a great lyric for a song...can I make a song out of it too? let me know...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 October 2008

Interesting! flow of verses fine! The style of expression I liked......10+

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Kathleen West 07 October 2008

I absolutely love this! It seems like a song, and witty too! ! A perfect 10.....Kathleen

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