Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Dreamer Comments

Rating: 4.8

I had such a dream last night,
I was floating above the trees,
And my lips were touching,
Were they my lips she asked.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Marieta Maglas 08 February 2011

You're a real dreamer and this is a good write.Mari.

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Khaldun Atum 24 November 2010

One word: Vivid. Excellently written.

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Kelsey Korosko 24 November 2010

I like that you made this piece all your own..uniquely personal and sweet all in one.: D

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David Rain 22 November 2010

This is a good love poem. It's not some rhyming little piece of lovey dovey trash, it's unique and it's personal. ^.^

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Robin Machorro 16 November 2010

wow that was really good! its been a long time since a read a poem that good keep up the good work :)

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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