Sunday, July 20, 2008

Dreamed And Lost Comments

Rating: 4.7

A cry floats on the gentle breeze.

A sound of laughter, A sound of joy.
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Aimee Nell 28 September 2008

Simple words expressing something so complex. Great work. Keep writing!

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Fay Slimm 06 August 2008

So sad and slowly told. The spaces between stress the sorrow. So very well penned. It deserves it's full ten. From Fay.

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Rohan R 02 August 2008

Simple and Great work

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Cecilia Munoz 20 July 2008

this is a very nice poem.... i love it...

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