Thursday, February 2, 2006

Dreamcatcher Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dreamed a dream in bed last night,
Of places most bizarre.
Of ponds of liquid lemon pie,
And ducks that played guitar.
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Bridgid Patrick
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Allan James Saywell 08 February 2006

this is brilliant because some child will read it and find a certain joy or as in my case the child within enjoyed the poem and i know you have a great imagination, which you have shown in this poem, well done Bridget With a warmth(allan james saywell'

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Joy Vanderhelm 04 February 2006

Somewhat childlike and yet thoroughly entertaining. It has a certain Alice-in-Wonderland twist to it., as do some of your others. Quite enjoyable.

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Hugh Cobb 02 February 2006

Dear Brigid, This is another wonderul poem. It would be lovely for children or for any who still retain a child-like spirit and vision of life and dreams. A very good write. Warmly, Hugh

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Duncan Wyllie 02 February 2006

Ha! Ha! what a great poem and with a brilliant conclusion. Loads of fun here. Keep smiling love Duncan

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