Saturday, March 27, 2010

Dreamcatcher Comments

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She came in my dreams last night,
She comes in my dreams every time,
Known as the Dreamcatcher,
She is the one who has captured my mind,
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Parth Parekh
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 31 March 2010

This is an engaging narrative and you could lace it up with more picturesque adjectives or use more vivid and descriptive words that 'paint' a scene. The use of a Thesaurus and Synonym/Antonym dictionary is very helpful in choosing appropriate words that convey your idea into rhymes and phrases.

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Manonton Dalan 27 March 2010

hmmm... a dream within a dream... go back to sleep catch some more. thanks for sharing.md (how is our brothers in mumbai?)

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