Thursday, September 27, 2007

Dream Woman Comments

Rating: 2.5

As the wind blew west,
And the river was streaming through,
I am now admitted heaven's guest,
Admitted to see the perfect love statue.
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Dan Jensen
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hey this is a really great poem, it's really sweet and would make any girl feel special. bt i was wondering this line was right- Wondering if had she me, heard. im not trying to be rude or seem like i know what you mean, but should it be- Wondering if she had heard me. or something like that maybe...

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